Preliminary Otto Marker Wording - Poll
Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 2:27 pm
Notice - I added Neil's suggestion (#9) and that reset the poll ... Please vote again.
This is a preliminary poll to see what we like. It's not official in any way. Please use this topic to suggest additional wordings as well and I'll try to add them to the poll as we go. The goal of this poll will be to help guide the group in coming up with the final wording.
I've tried to pull together all the candidates from the other topics, but please post here if I've left anything out or if you have new suggestions. This forum has somewhat limited formatting, but we can use font size or bolding to get a sense of what words deserve emphasis. I've done that with one of the options, so please let me know if you'd like any of the others reformatted as well (I didn't want to do any formatting without permission of the originators). Any comments and discussions are welcome here as well.
Also, I'm new to using polls, so please bear with me if we have any problems. I've initially set it up so you can choose any number of options (choose all the ones that you like), and I've also set it up so you can go back and change your votes as well. Please post any comments or other suggestions to this topic.
Here are the candidates:
Candidate 1:
To commemorate
the
Otto Lilienthal Universal Hang Glider Championships
& 123rd Birthday Anniversary Party
of
Sunday May 23rd 1971
on this hill establishing on that day
the modern sport of hang gliding
Candidate 2:
This hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of sport hang gliding
was born.
Candidate 3:
On this hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of sport hang gliding
was born.
Candidate 4:
From this hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of
sport hang gliding
was born.
Candidate 5:
From this hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of sport hang gliding
was launched.
Candidate 6:
The Modern Sport of Hang Gliding
Was Established on This Hill
at the
Great First Annual Universal Hang Glider
Championships & 123rd Otto Lilienthal
Anniversary Birthday Celebration
of May 23rd 1971
Candidate 7:
On - May 23 1971 - From this Hill
Hang Gliding as a Modern Sport
Was Established Here at the First
Great Universal
Hang Glider Championships
Celebrating
Otto Lilienthal's 123rd Birthday
Candidate 8:
On May 23rd 1971, the Modern Sport of
Hang Gliding
was Launched from this Site during the
First Hang Glider Championships
and 123rd Birthday Celebration of
Otto Lilienthal
Candidate 9:
Commemoration of this Hill
May 23 1971
The Great Universal Hang Glider
Championships & Celebration of
Otto Lilienthal's 123rd Birthday
the Sport of Hang Gliding
Began Here
This is a preliminary poll to see what we like. It's not official in any way. Please use this topic to suggest additional wordings as well and I'll try to add them to the poll as we go. The goal of this poll will be to help guide the group in coming up with the final wording.
I've tried to pull together all the candidates from the other topics, but please post here if I've left anything out or if you have new suggestions. This forum has somewhat limited formatting, but we can use font size or bolding to get a sense of what words deserve emphasis. I've done that with one of the options, so please let me know if you'd like any of the others reformatted as well (I didn't want to do any formatting without permission of the originators). Any comments and discussions are welcome here as well.
Also, I'm new to using polls, so please bear with me if we have any problems. I've initially set it up so you can choose any number of options (choose all the ones that you like), and I've also set it up so you can go back and change your votes as well. Please post any comments or other suggestions to this topic.
Here are the candidates:
Candidate 1:
To commemorate
the
Otto Lilienthal Universal Hang Glider Championships
& 123rd Birthday Anniversary Party
of
Sunday May 23rd 1971
on this hill establishing on that day
the modern sport of hang gliding
Candidate 2:
This hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of sport hang gliding
was born.
Candidate 3:
On this hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of sport hang gliding
was born.
Candidate 4:
From this hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of
sport hang gliding
was born.
Candidate 5:
From this hill
in Newport Beach City
on May 23, 1971:
the modern renaissance
of sport hang gliding
was launched.
Candidate 6:
The Modern Sport of Hang Gliding
Was Established on This Hill
at the
Great First Annual Universal Hang Glider
Championships & 123rd Otto Lilienthal
Anniversary Birthday Celebration
of May 23rd 1971
Candidate 7:
On - May 23 1971 - From this Hill
Hang Gliding as a Modern Sport
Was Established Here at the First
Great Universal
Hang Glider Championships
Celebrating
Otto Lilienthal's 123rd Birthday
Candidate 8:
On May 23rd 1971, the Modern Sport of
Hang Gliding
was Launched from this Site during the
First Hang Glider Championships
and 123rd Birthday Celebration of
Otto Lilienthal
Candidate 9:
Commemoration of this Hill
May 23 1971
The Great Universal Hang Glider
Championships & Celebration of
Otto Lilienthal's 123rd Birthday
the Sport of Hang Gliding
Began Here